Workshop #16: They Just Wanna Touch by Mezzo

At Audiotuts+ we irregularly put up a reader track for workshopping and critique (find out how to submit a track). This is how it works: you upload your song, and every week or so we’ll publish one here and step away from the podium. The floor is yours to talk about the track and how the artist can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

Thanks for your submissions everyone – and keep them coming. We have enough to publish two or three a week at the moment. Let me know if it gets too much.

This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. They have put their track (and their heart and soul) in your hands to learn and get useful feedback.

  • Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
  • Can the arrangement be improved?
  • How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
  • What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
  • Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
  • Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
  • Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
  • Do you have any other constructive feedback?

They Just Wanna Touch by Mezzo

Mezzo describes the track: “Similar to something Plies would rap over.”

Author’s website: myspace.com/mezzomuzik314.

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Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section.

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Discussion 7 Comments

  1. Willem says:

    You need a melody over your chord structure. Other than that, i think it’s produced well, if you aim at an avant-garde audience.
    I’m glad i didn’t hear any barking homies, but that’s just my taste speaking out loud.

  2. dave says:

    nice sound. very even with no sharp edges. too bad the end is the only sharp edges.

  3. Kick is a bit muffled, too much clipping? Other than that great track though!

  4. Esben Lorenzen says:

    The spin-down, tempo thing at 1:36 kindda felt wrong. not that it shouldnt be there, but maybe you could finetune it a little.
    Other than that, great track!

    • Greg Theilmann says:

      I agree that the tempo slow down or whatever you call it felt out of place. Also the ending was a bit abrupt, which isn’t bad necessarily. Overall i liked the track. The clipping on the kick sounded good to me.

  5. Valdon says:

    I enjoyed this track – Well Produced. What Equipment Was Used?

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