This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.
Description of the track:
This is my first “big” orchestral composition in that I’m actually utilizing each section of the orchestra. I haven’t done that before and thus would really appreciate feedback on how the song is orchestrated. Also feedback on anything else (composition itself, mixing, etc.) is highly appreciated.
This song features mainly EWQL Symphonic Orchestra Gold along with some NI Damage and Logic factory sounds.
“The moment you doubt whether you can fly, you cease for ever to be able to do it.”
- J.M. Barrie
Artist’s website: marklaukkanen.tumblr.com
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